So I tested out your version of Yuna's Permission and Deeper Conversation.

The chords you gave for Deeper Conversation was a bit off in my opinion, like it didn't fit in, according to my ear at least. Felt like the chords you gave is in another key or something, but maybe I'm too used to my version, take whatever I said with a grain of salt.

For Permission, some of the chords fit nicely to my ear, but I think you had one extra chord for each line of the verse, which made them felt out of place. Some of the chords also felt like it didn't belong where you put them. But I can use your chords as reference for Permission and put my version of it.

Sorry for the really late reply. I got lazy... as usual.